Is this in real-time? Because that was really fast. Even if you throw twenty minutes for safety, that was pretty damn quick.
"He had me patch it through to the Secret Service outbuilding." (But they work for the Secret Service. And is there another outbuilding? The Food and Drug Administration outbuilding getting lots of activity this time of night? )
Again with the outbuilding.
"Some guy from central called and said my packet's all ... "
"... guess there was something wrong with his packet..." 'You play Lotto? How about that local sports team.'
"Mr. President -- I have a message from the White House." <zap>
"What are you trying to do, Jack?" -- "Are you going to kill me?"
"I have always acted in the country's best interests."
"This day is been trying enough. And now the President's been attacked."
"Undo your safety belt. Slowly."
Shooting a door open is pretty bad-ass, but imagine if you miss or it ricochets and shoots Logan in the femoral artery and he bleeds out before broadcasting at 6.8"
"Aw, that's President Logan, Jack." 'I just bought a settee because of his tax cuts.'
"If you don't have a confession by then, we'll all be arrested for treason."